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Essence Better With Time

Ripened grapes turned to wine. Brandy’s wine, burned in time. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 10.13.2014 Nette Onclaud’s Contest: In its Essence

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2014 3:39:00 PM

wow, this is quite nice. I hope it won?? I'll be seeing the winners soon.This one had a very good imagery to it and deserves to be on the list.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/13/2014 5:30:00 PM

I really like this Brenda...hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 6:34:00 PM

Thank you Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/13/2014 2:23:00 PM

Great essence, good luck in the contest.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Maurice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2014 1:14:00 PM

- Great, Brenda !!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2014 1:05:00 PM

Brilliant rhyme Brenda you have nailed this tough challenge:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2014 4:14:00 PM

I am:-) hugs my friend. Jan xxxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I hope you are right.