Essence Better With Time

Ripened grapes turned to wine.
Brandy’s wine, burned in time.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.13.2014
Nette Onclaud’s Contest:
In its Essence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 3:39 PM
wow, this is quite nice. I hope it won?? I'll be seeing the winners soon.This one had a very good imagery to it and deserves to be on the list.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 5:30 PM
I really like this Brenda...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Thank you Tim
Yvonne Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Great essence, good luck in the contest.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Maurice
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 1:14 PM
- Great, Brenda !!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Brilliant rhyme Brenda you have nailed this tough challenge:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:14 PM
I am:-) hugs my friend. Jan xxxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Thanks Jan. I hope you are right.
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