Esoteric Stop Light

Should have of read the Book first					 
dropping out tuned in to a false light					 
the drop will never quench the thirst  				            
Driving on snake's back while in the night                 		          
through candy colored blinkers right 				              
drawing closer it was not God       				             
adapter of but not true flight  					                   
Read the Book returning thank God  					
					  /      	                                  
for HUTAIN THIS ONE... contest by john beam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 12, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Hi John.. it is difficult to comment on your latest post about the daisies .. I luv it and tried to comments but the captcha letters are totally gone luv.. so don't know what is wrong but it is a great poem full of wonderful imagery luv..
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August 12, 2011 at 3:57 PM
not sure either but not matter how I format a poem it puts it up the same way strange. Thanks for comment, hope you have pleasant day.
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July 26, 2011 at 8:28 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning John. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
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