Escher

eternal divorced
her now external
but in the end
just add less
and you get
more
but

remember that
exits exist as
entrances
for doors
let you
go in
and

out
thus
the great
outdoors as
to staying indoors
both need explored to
know the ways of heaven

and
earth

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/3/2019 8:15:00 AM

Eventually the door will only take us in one direction. I’m curious as to which new doors will be revealed. This piece brings to mind those circular doors in old department stores. I can see some people going in circles unsure of where they really want to go.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/3/2019 9:35:00 AM

Yes, those doors were merry go rounds for us as kids. But don't forget Sartre's "No Exit"...