Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Escape of Snow

ESCAPE OF SNOW

Snow shivers on heavy branches.
Lyrics of snowbirds awakens awe.
Bent back of pines — tortuous cane.
Wheelbarrow weighted down with snow.

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After storm comes avalanches,
Power outage and blackbird caw.
Powder keg of snow from yonder pane.
Eyes mesmerized ~ life travels slow.

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For Winter, I hold… no disdain.
This reprieve: there’s no grass to mow.

12/9/2017
Rimas Dissolutas Form

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Rhoda Tripp December 12, 2017 at 1:12 PM Congratulations, Kim! Kim Rodrigues December 12, 2017 at 1:42 PM Thank you, Rhoda!

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 12, 2017 at 12:12 AM Congratulations, Kim on your top win. Kim Rodrigues December 12, 2017 at 7:36 AM Thank you, Subimal!

John Gondolf December 10, 2017 at 9:11 AM I enjoyed the imagery of this poem, Kim. I liked the form as well, I had not seen it before. John Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2017 at 9:30 AM Thanks so much, John!

Ravi Sathasivam December 10, 2017 at 1:46 AM Excellent. Great imagery write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you, Ravi! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 9, 2017 at 10:58 PM Snow white truth wrapped in a humorous aloha grass skirt, Kim. Cool combo treat this insightful poem be. Excellent poem. Love and smiles always. Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2017 at 8:28 AM Thank you, Freddie! Reading your comments is like reading a bit of poetry. Blessings to you, my dear friend! :)

Cheryl Hoffman December 9, 2017 at 8:21 PM Great imagery and humor here Kim!~Che :) Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2017 at 8:32 PM Thanks, Che!