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Escape of Snow

ESCAPE OF SNOW Snow shivers on heavy branches. Lyrics of snowbirds awakens awe. Bent back of pines — tortuous cane. Wheelbarrow weighted down with snow. ~ After storm comes avalanches, Power outage and blackbird caw. Powder keg of snow from yonder pane. Eyes mesmerized ~ life travels slow. ~ For Winter, I hold… no disdain. This reprieve: there’s no grass to mow. 12/9/2017 Rimas Dissolutas Form

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Date: 12/12/2017 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Date: 12/12/2017 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 12/10/2017 9:11:00 AM
I enjoyed the imagery of this poem, Kim. I liked the form as well, I had not seen it before. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 12/10/2017 1:46:00 AM
Excellent. Great imagery write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi! :)
Date: 12/9/2017 10:58:00 PM
Snow white truth wrapped in a humorous aloha grass skirt, Kim. Cool combo treat this insightful poem be. Excellent poem. Love and smiles always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie! Reading your comments is like reading a bit of poetry. Blessings to you, my dear friend! :)
Date: 12/9/2017 8:21:00 PM
Great imagery and humor here Kim!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thanks, Che!

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