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Escape

If I do persist In the dreams I can't let go Will I lose myself? Dreaming in colour Beneath the waking shadow I cannot let go A thousand faces Behind my always-closed eyes All that is me fades

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Date: 1/25/2010 6:35:00 PM
I have read this poem about 15 times and each time I read I like it more. I normally do not read the ame poem so many times but, you have written such a wonderful Haiku, I had to go back again and again just to make sure I did not miss anything. Thank you for a superb experience. Mac
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