Escape

Run
Faster
Must escape
The fear of his
Love

lanterne

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Dana S

Date: 12/15/2011 12:29:00 PM

Thank you everyone! And @Doris, I'm not commit-less, this was written at a time where I was feeling very vulnerable, and had recently gotten out of a long standing relationship. It ended badly, and I wasn't quite ready for the man that came into my life next.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/27/2010 5:27:00 PM

Dana~ Congratulations on your featured poem very well done! Laura :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/25/2010 4:27:00 PM

Dana. Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses

Joe Fisher

Date: 3/25/2010 12:21:00 AM

Like this a lot. Im a runner.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/23/2010 3:45:00 AM

Beautiful lanterne, Dana. Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/22/2010 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dana. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/22/2010 5:14:00 AM

why is love fear? It is hard work? I never have understood the commitless ones. Maybe they know they will be a disappointment. Find a forgiving soul. pondering lifes little mysteries on this Monday with healthcare.

Ashley Yates

Date: 10/28/2009 11:12:00 AM

Dont be afaid to love, the reward may be much greater than your chances of getting hurt.... Dont let life and love pass you by because of fear. Nice write!

Date: 10/3/2009 6:29:00 PM

I got a chuckle out of Anthony's response too. We all have times we get scared of being hurt. Interesting use of this concise form. Thank you for participating in my latest blog. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 1:28:00 PM

Chuckled when I read Anthony's comment because I was thinking the same thing. We all want love, but when it is within reach, suddenly there is a sense of vulnerability and fear because we know we are capable of being hurt. Very nice lanterne, Dana! Love, Carolyn