Esau

Here lies a young gunfighter named Esau Fast on the trigger but slow on the draw 9-13-18

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 9/20/2018 11:11:00 PM

Congrats...smiled!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/23/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/19/2018 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this clever entry Larry! : )

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/20/2018 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Virginia Waters

Date: 9/18/2018 7:36:00 PM

been to tombstone - can picture this there = very funny - good boothiller

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/20/2018 8:29:00 PM

Thanks, Virginia!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2018 2:43:00 PM

many congrats on your win Larry your poem made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/20/2018 8:29:00 PM

Thanks as always, Jan!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/18/2018 12:53:00 PM

Back with congrats on your well deserved win, Larry.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Jesse Rowe

Date: 9/18/2018 12:11:00 PM

Congrats on your top finish. I could picture this on a tombstone in the Old West somewhere.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2018 1:09:00 PM

Thanks, Jesse. There actually is a tombstone in El Paso as I recall that says "He never killed a man that didn't need killing."

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 7:03:00 PM

Good one, Larry. Well done. Very witty.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/18/2018 1:09:00 PM

Thank you, my friend