Esau

Here lies a young gunfighter named Esau
Fast on the trigger but slow on the draw

9-13-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 11:11 PM
Congrats...smiled!
Bradfield Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, Barbara!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever entry Larry! : )
Bradfield Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Waters Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 7:36 PM
been to tombstone - can picture this there = very funny - good boothiller
Bradfield Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thanks, Virginia!
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:43 PM
many congrats on your win Larry your poem made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thanks as always, Jan!
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Back with congrats on your well deserved win, Larry.
Bradfield Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 1:07 PM
Thank you, Line!
Rowe Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Congrats on your top finish. I could picture this on a tombstone in the Old West somewhere.
Bradfield Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thanks, Jesse. There actually is a tombstone in El Paso as I recall that says "He never killed a man that didn't need killing."
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Good one, Larry. Well done. Very witty.
Bradfield Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you, my friend
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