Erupts

erupts Does refusing to see, cloud your vision again, Does refusing to hear, bring on deafness my friend If you close all the doors, does silence descend, Till lonliness intervenes, Refusing to love, Brings bad tidings and then, Solo the path, & solitudes, when, Set on them chickens, like clukky ole hen, Till love erupts on the scene. Don Johnson

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 2:30:00 PM

DOn , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/30/2012 11:28:00 PM

This is a brilliant, a simply brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and intriguing poem this evening! What a remarkable and superior piece, Great Work!!

Jacob Cra

Date: 12/30/2012 7:46:00 PM

Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide!