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Erosion

Love is in the air,
Puckered lips of sandstone skin:
Kisses of the wind.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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September 1, 2009 at 9:14 AM

sand stone skin .........man you're on point!

Doris Culverhouse

August 12, 2009 at 7:32 PM

Very good, keep up the good work

August 2, 2009 at 12:50 PM

Curious title @.@ I imagined something more realated to nature jojo so it was a big surprise =D thanks for the experience =D

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 1, 2009 at 5:37 AM

Good morning Raul, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. It is always a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Love, Carol

Trudy Diane Rider

July 31, 2009 at 8:18 PM

You DO write beautiful Haiku! ~*~Trudy~*~

Deirdre Omaidin

July 31, 2009 at 2:19 PM

absolutely wonderful Raul Regards: Déirdre

July 31, 2009 at 11:17 AM

Raul~ Very different and unique Haiku ! Laura :)

July 31, 2009 at 7:40 AM

As usual, your haiku is evocative and has me seeing and thinking things I haven't imagined before. All the best, Krista

Carrie Richards

July 31, 2009 at 6:46 AM

Wow...this one is breathtaking, Raul! I think this is one of your best!! :) Love it!~ Carrie

July 31, 2009 at 4:21 AM

Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

July 31, 2009 at 4:15 AM

A beauty Raul...Your Haikus are always fantastic.. Take good care of yourself..

Charmaine Chircop

July 30, 2009 at 10:37 PM

Beautiful Haiku--charma

James Marshall Goff

July 30, 2009 at 9:14 PM

beautifully ethereal! Raul!! jim

Jessica Arteaga

July 30, 2009 at 9:02 PM

gives a really good visual, lovely haiku

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