Erosion

Love is in the air, Puckered lips of sandstone skin: Kisses of the wind.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/1/2009 9:14:00 AM

sand stone skin .........man you're on point!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/12/2009 7:32:00 PM

Very good, keep up the good work

Cesar Cantu

Date: 8/2/2009 12:50:00 PM

Curious title @.@ I imagined something more realated to nature jojo so it was a big surprise =D thanks for the experience =D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2009 5:37:00 AM

Good morning Raul, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. It is always a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Love, Carol

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/31/2009 8:18:00 PM

You DO write beautiful Haiku! ~*~Trudy~*~

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 7/31/2009 2:19:00 PM

absolutely wonderful Raul Regards: Déirdre

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/31/2009 11:17:00 AM

Raul~ Very different and unique Haiku ! Laura :)

Krista Kurth

Date: 7/31/2009 7:40:00 AM

As usual, your haiku is evocative and has me seeing and thinking things I haven't imagined before. All the best, Krista

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/31/2009 6:46:00 AM

Wow...this one is breathtaking, Raul! I think this is one of your best!! :) Love it!~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2009 4:21:00 AM

Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/31/2009 4:15:00 AM

A beauty Raul...Your Haikus are always fantastic.. Take good care of yourself..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/30/2009 10:37:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku--charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/30/2009 9:14:00 PM

beautifully ethereal! Raul!! jim

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/30/2009 9:02:00 PM

gives a really good visual, lovely haiku