Erosion

Bare roots chatter from gale and gentle wave
Element and time join forces to shave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Payne Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 10:14 AM
This is awesome, I love the second line, a wonderful phrase. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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December 30, 2008 at 2:54 PM
Interesting reflection captured in just two lines. Nice use of rhyme. Nice one! Karen
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December 29, 2008 at 7:16 AM
'...bare roots chatter' is a marvelous phrase. A colourful definition succinctly expressed. Well done John! Best wishes, Keith
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