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Erosion

Bare roots chatter from gale and gentle wave Element and time join forces to shave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/31/2008 10:14:00 AM
This is awesome, I love the second line, a wonderful phrase. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/30/2008 2:54:00 PM
Interesting reflection captured in just two lines. Nice use of rhyme. Nice one! Karen
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:16:00 AM
'...bare roots chatter' is a marvelous phrase. A colourful definition succinctly expressed. Well done John! Best wishes, Keith
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