Erie

The house wasn't much to look at,
Although it was grand in its day.
But we never got tired of visiting,
Or seeing the family on Sunday.

The floors were old and creaky,
The walls were strong and tall.
The yard was ever the smallest,
Yet, we still found a way to play ball.

The clock in the kitchen kept pendulum time,
Its gentle gongs...as the hours were to go.
The louder sounds were of plinking from the front room,
As we banged the keys of the old piano.

The sweet aromas from the bakery next door,
Wafted over us, and the neighborhood in the air.
Always reminding one of that pleasant place,
Filled with caked and cookies and eclairs.

We didn't understand the words,
That our grandparents' were to say.
That "Polish" banter between them and our parents,
Have kept their secrets even today.

While our moms were helping Grandma in the kitchen,
Our dad were on the porch playing cards.
As for us...we ran our little games,
More and more noise from the yard.

Only memories now remain,
And sometimes after a day of aching hands and weary feet,
My mind turns to those more pleasant days,
As I remember the times, spent on Erie Street.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/10/2010 7:31:00 AM
Oh my, Daniel, we both listened to that "Polish banter" from our grandparents. Mine lived upstairs! As one Pole to another, I must tell you every image here -- especialy the bakery, card games, playing ball and creaky old floors -- brought back wonderful memories for me. What a delight to read! Thanks so much for reminding me of happy childhood days. Love and blessings, Carolyn (And your grook had the greatest paradox I've seen yet!)
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:51:00 PM
I love this Daniel.....you took me into the warmth of the family on Erie Street, and made me want to spend more time there....What wonderful memories to share...you have captured the beauty of what family should be...and hopefully in some cases...still exist. We can only hope so. ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:43:00 PM
Nice write, I couldn't help feeling relaxed and reminisce as well. Thanks for sharing. Truly enjoyed.
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