Paul Schneiter Poet Rhyme

'ere I Sleep

I know she loved me
not because she told me
but because she showed me.

Silky fingers through my hair
nibbled kisses everywhere
pleasure nigh too much to bear.

Wordless whispers in breath soul deep
foreordained our fusion to keep
thus I know she loved me 'ere I sleep.

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Silpika Kalita November 22, 2021 at 3:52 AM Gorgeous. Feelings at the peak. Splendid share. Hugs Silpika Paul Schneiter November 28, 2021 at 9:36 PM Silpika, thank you . . . you're probably too kind (but I love it). Sorry for the delay in answering--computer has been down. Hugs, Paul

Lindsay Laurie November 7, 2021 at 6:13 PM Hello Paul ... nice verse indeed Paul based on trust and feelings - thanks Paul - Lindsay Paul Schneiter November 13, 2021 at 8:45 PM Thank you, Lindsay. Yes, "trust and feelings" are operative in this poem and everywhere else. As usual, your comment expresses truth. Hugs, Paul

Jenna Logan October 31, 2021 at 12:17 AM It's not always words that express love. It is best expressed by a touch or a look. Paul Schneiter October 31, 2021 at 7:04 AM Thank you, Jenna. It's sweet of you to comment; I appreciate it. I agree: Words are sometimes less than adequate for expressing love (and not as much fun). Hugs, Paul

Deb M October 30, 2021 at 9:42 PM That’s lovely Paul….well written! Check your soup mail!!! Debx Deb M October 31, 2021 at 8:24 AM Sent soup mail again Paul. Debx Paul Schneiter October 31, 2021 at 6:59 AM I value and appreciate your kind comment, Deb M. I hope I am worthy of it. For some reason I'm unable to open your Soup Mail. I'm anxious to read it. Can you send it again? Hugs, Paul