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Erasing My Mind's Structure

Anger arises erasing my mind's structure Chaos takes over Wanting to improve my writing ability and see if its probable for me to become a professional writer in the future.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/10/2009 3:07:00 PM
Nicely written Haiku. Sara
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:42:00 PM
Good form- eddie
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Date: 8/10/2009 1:20:00 PM
5,7,5...Haiku indeed... I like the form, creative and clever write......:JP]
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