Erasing My Mind's Structure

Anger arises
erasing my mind's structure
Chaos takes over



Wanting to improve my writing ability and see if its probable for me to become a
professional writer in the future.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Nicely written Haiku. Sara
Orozco Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Good form- eddie
Pickett Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 1:20 PM
5,7,5...Haiku indeed... I like the form, creative and clever write......:JP]
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