Eraser

My head on your chest, stroking your hair.
 A sigh of contentment, for me is rare.
The beat of your heart, at a steady pace.
 A caress from your hand, making mine race.

Lying together in your loving embrace, 
 You're the only person that makes me feel safe.
Your lips so soft as they gently brush mine.
 My hunger grows as I trace your body line.

The things I feel for you, I used to only dream.
 Your attention to my heart makes my body scream.
Its comforting to know, you're not just using me.
 Not for sex, not for money, you want me for me.

A man who can please with his body and his mind, 
 Let me tell you, you truly are a treasured and rare find.
A kiss that you feel down to your very tip toes, 
 And someone who is happy to be with you and it shows.

You positively glow from the inside out, 
 Erasing everything from my fears to my doubts.
Thank you for your caress and your kiss, 
 In bed, lying in your arms is long awaited bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 3/27/2009 8:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful written poem, If only we all could find true love like this... It seems like it is hard to find someone who really wants you for you, so many of em working an angle...But When you have found it, you need to hold on for dear life..Cause it is rare..You are truly blessed to have it...I pray one day the Lord blesses me with someone truly special.. So much love and passion flowing here...Thank you so much for your kind words on my poem...God Bless You and Best Wishes Always, Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:48:00 PM
This is a beautifully penned poem, Aleera. And if he wants you just for you, you know you have a keeper. Isn't it wonderful when someone can erase all your fears and doubts!
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:20:00 AM
Wow Aleera, what a beautiful image you have composed here as loving and being loved for who we are is the most beautiful and meaningful kind. You always provide your readers with such warm emotions that reach out and gently touch their hearts and I Thank You for that Aleera. Excellent Poem... Your Fan Boy MPK
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