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About tattered wings-This haiku is published in haiku journal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Helppi Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:28 PM
The mallard's last cry just may quiet a hungry child's. But sadly, in today's world much of hunting is merely sport. I like how you transmit much with little, Nice!
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:24 AM
- Animal World .... great haiku Charmaine!!! - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Brilliant my dear .....hunting season started yesterday here....hugs Tim
Mcdaid Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 12:53 PM
mind bending beautifully crafted piece charmaine lots of visions comes to mind in this one dear friend excellent pen
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:55 AM
wonderfully descriptive Haiku Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx
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