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Just like a rubber will you erase me? when i cut mysef do i bleed? if i smoke will it kill my lungs or even if i smoke weed when i look into a mirror what do i see just an empty face no longing never ending space im filling a void the alchohol fils my head i can no longer see inside im empty yet i feel dizzy i close my eyes all is said the back hole i dig is when im six feet dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 6:38:00 AM
Nice analogy but sad you have worded so well, Lisa
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:15:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Lisa. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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