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Erase This Dream

She had never lived, She had never died, She was always a ghost, Rotten, dead inside. She hung from a rope, She fell to the grave, Her mind was all gone, There was nothing to save. We couldn't see it, It hit like a train! She left us all here, She left nothing but pain..... R.I.P. Olivia, 09/09/14, aged 14.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/3/2016 11:47:00 PM
this is deep. Dayna... LINDA
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Date: 6/3/2016 6:03:00 PM
Oh such a sad sad poem may she rest in peace:-( hugs jan xx
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Dayna Raven
Date: 6/3/2016 6:28:00 PM
Ahhh thanks for help with the typo!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2016 6:08:00 PM
I think you may have a typo in the title I think you mean erase:-) hugs jan xx

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