Erase This Dream

She had never lived,
She had never died, 
She was always a ghost,
Rotten, dead inside. 

She hung from a rope,
She fell to the grave,
Her mind was all gone, 
There was nothing to save.

We couldn't see it, 
It hit like a train!
She left us all here, 
She left nothing but pain.....


R.I.P. Olivia, 09/09/14, aged 14.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 3, 2016 at 11:47 PM
this is deep. Dayna... LINDA
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Oh such a sad sad poem may she rest in peace:-( hugs jan xx
Raven Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Ahhh thanks for help with the typo!
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 6:08 PM
I think you may have a typo in the title I think you mean erase:-) hugs jan xx
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