Equis a Ene a Equis

A leisure time consumes my mind, Such benevolence, quite as kind My coloured friends; comrades to find Chemicals in my brain to bind Cease, desist- I can't resist! Please, give them all to me! Without their Peace, I can't exist- Thank you God; they set me free *Unless you can decipher the title, it may be difficult to understand this poem

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Aiden Asoll

Date: 8/28/2013 9:43:00 AM

First to comment! I couldnt decipher your title unfortunately, so I'm not sure whether what this struck me as meaning is what it does atall, but ohwell, the interpretations I have gained from it mean a lot to me, especially "Chemicals in my brain to bind/ Cease, desist- I can't resist!" Or is it about drugs? :P Whatever intpretation though, I think its a damn clever bit of writing that excites me to read...without me sounding too stupid there, great piece. Aiden

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 10:30:00 AM

You are on the right path, Aiden. Thank for dropping by and for the read and thoughtful reply. You didn't sound stupid at all. Your kinds words and compliments mean so very much to me; with all sincerity, thank you :)