Equinox

Every day moves differently.
Quietly ebbing and flowing,
Under the guidance of time,
Invigorating growth even when
Neutral systems dictate cell death.
Only to show greater maturity, whether
Xeric or soggy – grow!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 10:24 AM
I like this a lot, Elizabeth...especially "Under the guidance of time".
Feeley Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Thanks for the encouragement, Jim. Even though it's snowing and blowing, I like to be reminded that spring's a comin'.
May Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:12 AM
An apt write for the day, I enjoyed the read
Feeley Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Glad you liked it Joseph. We lived in a region that has long winters and this marks a turning towards the warmer time of year. Appreciate the encouragement.
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