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Equally In Love

I'm torn between two
By night I'm in love with the Moon 

Morning beckons my other lover to come
By day I'm in love with the Sun

My heart can't decide
                    For it's equally torn
I can promise to give each a half
                    But i can't give one a whole

By night I'm in love with the Moon
By day I'm in love with the Sun

One is gentle and patient
                His love for me is like the tides, always constant
The other is strong and passionate
                His love burns like fire and i can't come too close to it

I'm torn between two and i can't decide

By night I'm in love with the Moon
By day I'm in love with the Sun

Copyright © Jolie Girl | Year Posted 2014

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Skat A Date: 3/29/2014 4:49:00 PM JOLIE, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 3/26/2014 11:21:00 AM Very beautiful, Jolie Girl, I enjoy the moon and sun, too. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest, sorry about the delay saying so. Login to Reply

Jolie Girl Date: 3/25/2014 8:43:00 PM Thanks everyone ! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/22/2014 10:20:00 PM Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, jolie Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/3/2014 3:27:00 PM A very interesting metaphor. I have been part of a love triangle and when I made an ultimatum she chose the other guy. Looking back I do not regret my decision. I still look fondly on my memory of her, she was an incredible woman. Login to Reply Jolie Girl Date: 3/20/2014 7:54:00 AM Thank you . Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/3/2014 3:27:00 PM I gave this the highest rating which is a 7.

Paul Callus Date: 2/26/2014 2:31:00 PM good poem. love triangles do exist, but then you get complications; is it worth it? :) Login to Reply Jolie Girl Date: 2/26/2014 2:57:00 PM If the other two parties are worth it then it is ... Thanks .