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Equally In Love

I'm torn between two By night I'm in love with the Moon Morning beckons my other lover to come By day I'm in love with the Sun My heart can't decide For it's equally torn I can promise to give each a half But i can't give one a whole By night I'm in love with the Moon By day I'm in love with the Sun One is gentle and patient His love for me is like the tides, always constant The other is strong and passionate His love burns like fire and i can't come too close to it I'm torn between two and i can't decide By night I'm in love with the Moon By day I'm in love with the Sun

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Skat A

Date: 3/29/2014 4:49:00 PM

JOLIE, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/26/2014 11:21:00 AM

Very beautiful, Jolie Girl, I enjoy the moon and sun, too. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest, sorry about the delay saying so.

Jolie Girl

Date: 3/25/2014 8:43:00 PM

Thanks everyone !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2014 10:20:00 PM

Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, jolie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/3/2014 3:27:00 PM

A very interesting metaphor. I have been part of a love triangle and when I made an ultimatum she chose the other guy. Looking back I do not regret my decision. I still look fondly on my memory of her, she was an incredible woman.

Jolie Girl
Date: 3/20/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thank you .

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2014 3:27:00 PM

I gave this the highest rating which is a 7.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2014 2:31:00 PM

good poem. love triangles do exist, but then you get complications; is it worth it? :)

Jolie Girl
Date: 2/26/2014 2:57:00 PM

If the other two parties are worth it then it is ... Thanks .