Equality In the End-

taking a step away 
from the noise and commotion
with uneasy thoughts 
following the nameless emotion
tilting back and forth
and side to side
while flower holding
hands push you in the divide
and you suddenly
find yourself laying alone
soon realizing 
that you’re not quite at home

the next step away
allows for more apprehension
but you thought
all this would release the tension
that comes with
leaving the familiar door
and wondering 
around the sinking floor
that drops you
into a mysterious unknown
soon realizing
that you’re not quite at home

the final step away
halts your timeless clock
and the world stops turning
like a key in a lock
as light begins
to fade into a shadow dark
with a soundless sigh
as your farewell remark
buried beneath 
your name on the gray stone
soon realizing 
that you’re not quite at home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ginn Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Today is a soft restless sort of day and unwilling to get involved in the too many projects I'm supposed to be doing I was sitting here doing my homework and I thought of poetry and how soft it makes me feel. Of course I looked you up since your my favorite. You did not disappoint
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:18 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Luke. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Weiner Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 9:19 PM
whoa... that was powerful and deep. I love how it hits hard but still finds a soft spot. well written
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