Epitaph

she was but 
a whisp of breeze
but caressed within her words
is a love of humanity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shango Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:55 PM
You carve on my mind with words. Hey, Jane come back and write again ... your poetry is too beautiful to miss. Happy new year to you too.
Eggins Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 1:53 AM
Im back .. but Ive not seen you around my friend will take a look at what youve been up to later after dinner :) love Jayne x
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous
Anderson Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Jayne, just saying thnx for reading and the comments on my writes...Always appreciated...JA
Hilliker Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 12:59 PM
The way it should be ....... great Epitaph! Beautifully written.
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent work...Sara
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Jayne. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Congrats Jayne on your HM in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph and great words to enter in the contest... enjoy your special honor luv..
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:56 AM
I thought this was one of the best, Jayne. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 6:13 AM
this is so profound. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved HM, Jayne
Taylor Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Congrats, Jayne. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph
Neels Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your HM with this beautiful epitaph Jayne :) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 3:44 AM
congrats on HM in contest .....luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
K. Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 10:22 PM
this sure is beautiful, Jayne! wonderful message you have here-- congrats! -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:39 PM
Jayne, this one was beautiful. Sorry I never noticed the first time I saw this that your name was not on it. Otherwise, I am sure it would have placed even higher. Luv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 9:24 PM
lovely entry for the contest , congrats on your HM
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Hey, I have not gotten around to seeing most of my entries yet, but this is very nice if it's in my contest! Good luck. I have no idea how I will be able to judge that one (I keep putting it off for that reason.haha) luv, Andrea
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 4:51 AM
So beautiful Jane!Celene
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Amazing!!!! The best to you in the contest Jayne. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 6:05 AM
very very nice well done good luck in yhe contest with this wonderful write have a great weekend and thanks for your comments faleshia
Horsman Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:24 AM
this is lovely, Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Very nicely worded and expressed epitaph, Jayne
Wilson Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 12:03 PM
oh very lovely! good luck Take care~Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:28 AM
Excellent Jayne.. a great Epitaph and good luck in the contest.. simple and sweet ..us blondies have to stick together luv... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry as well..
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