Epitaph

she was but a whisp of breeze but caressed within her words is a love of humanity

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/31/2010 2:55:00 PM

You carve on my mind with words. Hey, Jane come back and write again ... your poetry is too beautiful to miss. Happy new year to you too.

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/14/2016 1:53:00 AM

Im back .. but Ive not seen you around my friend will take a look at what youve been up to later after dinner :) love Jayne x

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/6/2010 3:33:00 PM

Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/6/2010 3:29:00 PM

Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 11/5/2010 5:50:00 PM

Jayne, just saying thnx for reading and the comments on my writes...Always appreciated...JA

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/29/2010 12:59:00 PM

The way it should be ....... great Epitaph! Beautifully written.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2010 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent work...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Jayne. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2010 9:06:00 AM

Congrats Jayne on your HM in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph and great words to enter in the contest... enjoy your special honor luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2010 6:56:00 AM

I thought this was one of the best, Jayne. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2010 6:13:00 AM

this is so profound. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/25/2010 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved HM, Jayne

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/25/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congrats, Jayne. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/25/2010 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM with this beautiful epitaph Jayne :) Wilma

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/25/2010 3:44:00 AM

congrats on HM in contest .....luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/24/2010 10:22:00 PM

this sure is beautiful, Jayne! wonderful message you have here-- congrats! -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2010 9:39:00 PM

Jayne, this one was beautiful. Sorry I never noticed the first time I saw this that your name was not on it. Otherwise, I am sure it would have placed even higher. Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/24/2010 9:24:00 PM

lovely entry for the contest , congrats on your HM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2010 8:49:00 PM

Hey, I have not gotten around to seeing most of my entries yet, but this is very nice if it's in my contest! Good luck. I have no idea how I will be able to judge that one (I keep putting it off for that reason.haha) luv, Andrea

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/18/2010 4:51:00 AM

So beautiful Jane!Celene

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2010 7:12:00 AM

Amazing!!!! The best to you in the contest Jayne. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 10/15/2010 6:05:00 AM

very very nice well done good luck in yhe contest with this wonderful write have a great weekend and thanks for your comments faleshia

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/15/2010 2:24:00 AM

this is lovely, Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/14/2010 3:42:00 PM

Very nicely worded and expressed epitaph, Jayne

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/14/2010 12:03:00 PM

oh very lovely! good luck Take care~Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/14/2010 8:28:00 AM

Excellent Jayne.. a great Epitaph and good luck in the contest.. simple and sweet ..us blondies have to stick together luv... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry as well..