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Episode

I wait for you in the dark where the moon crashes the stars where I eat my fears and breath through my heart where another episode starts. I wait for you near the hole where all expectations fall where the only thing left is a hope trying to make a call. Jessica

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2024 9:47:00 AM

Dear Jessica, your emotive poem is expressed with vivid imagery, metaphors and dark suspense tinted with a pinprick light of hope as a challenging situation is anticipated or is arising. But I feel there is a reservoir hope to draw from to allow you to meet and overcome it. A very evocative and intriguing poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jessica Carrasco
Date: 6/29/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thanks Susan, you read my word so right that is scary...thank you very much for leaving your impression here...it is very encouraging...