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Epiphany On Route 78

Layer by furry layer, The deer carcass Dissolves into the infinite Returns to the radiance It came from. Dazzled by the Sun, I drive Taking in the sunny salted freeway Brilliant mile by brilliant mile, Air pristine by icy hillocks, Engine singing on all fours And my license plate’s my name. Who has the better Perspective on the radiance: Me, or The deer? Milind Padki

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Date: 8/3/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Miland. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Milind. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:49:00 PM
ongratulations on your poem being featured this week, Milind
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:59:00 PM
Milind~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:36:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Milind. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors what ever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:25:00 PM
The image of somatic disappearance really sticks
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