Epiphany

the morning begins like too many before it, the smell of the factory burns away the last remnants of the dreams i had when i was young

i bring effort enough to smile, offer "good mornin" to the others like me, and try to remember how this seemed like a good idea so many years ago 

i reach my station, alongside the co-worker that hums a dull tune of one note all day, and hang my head to play the part i've won

many days have passed, i hurt when i try to count the number, since i stood wide-eyed looking at a future that since went somewhere i don't know

i repeat the ballet, over and over and over, til the show ends and i can return to my place of solace where noone understands what i've done

i make it there, hardly damaged by my experience, look at the faces that welcome me, 

 

...and now i remember why i'm happy to do this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 11:16 AM
I had a pet Epiphany once, but I wasn’t sure what to feed it. Sadly it ran away from home. I see you have been here a long time. Have we been previously aquatinted?
Cummings Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:52 AM
The good thing about epiphanies is that another one may be just around the corner.
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:38 PM
A pleasure to find your beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kevin ~
Cummings Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Thank you Line. I am very humbled and proud that it was accepted.
A  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:52 PM
KEVIN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
Cummings Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:34 AM
SKAT, thank you for the kind words. To share our innermost thoughts, desires and fears is risky. To have it touch others is a blessing.
A   Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:26 PM
kevin cummings, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
Cummings Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you Linda, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Quigley Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 8:44 AM
I like this. A sense of desperation overshadowed by the love of family. Nicely written Kevin
Cummings Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Bob, I appreciate your thoughts and kindness in responding. Many sacrifice their dreams to create possibilities for others.
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