Contest: Epiphany. 22/8/2026
Contest: Epiphany. 22/8/2026 Sponsored by: Constance La France "To continue to live, can be an act of bravery." The poet. Desolate and in deepest despair, I had lost the will to live. My tormented self, wandered aimlessly through life. Consumed with anguish and grief, each sullen moment led to ending my misery. Finally the day came. I fell into a vortex of suffering. Drowning in devastated hopelessness, every ounce of my being became desperate. Morosely I stood on the precipice. My dismal heart could torture me no longer. Despondent and forlorn, I anticipated entering total oblivion. As if from nowhere came a voice! My melancholy mind became shrouded in doubt, as I stepped away from the edge. An epiphany clarified my impending mistake. Today I live in peace to write this poem. The voice simply said, "Your hurt wont go away. You will merely pass it to those that care."
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