Epiphany

Souls wither
Days Crawl 
Faith Wavers 
He is here 
Burden lifts 
Eyes tear 
Hearts beat
Rejoice
He is near
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Yes, we are here. The Cosmic consciousness is the concept that the universe is a living superorganism with which animals, including humans, interconnect, and form a collective consciousness which spans the cosmos. The idea bears similarity to Teilhard de Chardin's conception of the noosphere, James Lovelock's Gaia theory, to Hegel's Absolute idealism, and to Satori in Zen. It is reminiscent of Carl Jung's collective unconscious. ....It...higher power can not have a sex Love Debbie Guzzi
Burton Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 8:26 AM
yeah... i like this alot.. sounds like a omforter. enjoyed reading this and will read more.
Loving Iii Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 1:26 PM
yes He is. and he's as close as He can get without shattering the sound barrier if you know what i mean. John
Chamma Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 3:44 AM
Yes ...ma3 al imane tatma2in al koloob :) The world would lie in debris if He weren't near...Allah yhdee il jamee3 ya Rab... Wonderful feeling-provoking write =) Take good care D.N. Always, Farah
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November 19, 2008 at 8:59 AM
Amen! The short lines work well to carry this inspirational message. Blessings to you for sharing it. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen
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November 17, 2008 at 2:40 AM
DN Thank you my dear for your more than kind comment's. I'm humbled by a woman of your abilities. I look at this piece and I can see the exceptional ability that you have> I will read all your poem's in the next couple of day's. Love this inspiration. God bless you and your's Michael Torres
Christian Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 11:28 AM
aww sweet, yes he is very near, amen the this beautiful write God bless form diane
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November 14, 2008 at 2:59 AM
I liked this so much. He Is Near!! Small lines convey a lot. Thankyou for your sweet comments. Love, Chitra
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