Epiphany

Souls wither Days Crawl Faith Wavers He is here Burden lifts Eyes tear Hearts beat Rejoice He is near

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2009 12:21:00 PM

Yes, we are here. The Cosmic consciousness is the concept that the universe is a living superorganism with which animals, including humans, interconnect, and form a collective consciousness which spans the cosmos. The idea bears similarity to Teilhard de Chardin's conception of the noosphere, James Lovelock's Gaia theory, to Hegel's Absolute idealism, and to Satori in Zen. It is reminiscent of Carl Jung's collective unconscious. ....It...higher power can not have a sex Love Debbie Guzzi

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/3/2009 8:26:00 AM

yeah... i like this alot.. sounds like a omforter. enjoyed reading this and will read more.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/23/2008 1:26:00 PM

yes He is. and he's as close as He can get without shattering the sound barrier if you know what i mean. John

Farah Chamma

Date: 12/19/2008 3:44:00 AM

Yes ...ma3 al imane tatma2in al koloob :) The world would lie in debris if He weren't near...Allah yhdee il jamee3 ya Rab... Wonderful feeling-provoking write =) Take good care D.N. Always, Farah

Date: 11/19/2008 8:59:00 AM

Amen! The short lines work well to carry this inspirational message. Blessings to you for sharing it. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 2:40:00 AM

DN Thank you my dear for your more than kind comment's. I'm humbled by a woman of your abilities. I look at this piece and I can see the exceptional ability that you have> I will read all your poem's in the next couple of day's. Love this inspiration. God bless you and your's Michael Torres

Diane Christian

Date: 11/15/2008 11:28:00 AM

aww sweet, yes he is very near, amen the this beautiful write God bless form diane

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/14/2008 2:59:00 AM

I liked this so much. He Is Near!! Small lines convey a lot. Thankyou for your sweet comments. Love, Chitra