Envy

ENVY

Swimming in the deep
Sharks circling in green waters
Waiting for a cramp





Written By: Liz Ward
July 22nd 2016

jealousysuccesshaiku

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Beata Agustin

March 16, 2024 at 6:04 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Caren Krutsinger

May 8, 2018 at 7:34 AM

This struck me immediately as hilariously funny! I had to stop myself from laughing. Of course, you were striving for humor, and you definitely tickled me.

Liz Ward

May 8, 2018 at 8:58 PM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting Caren. Best wishes, Liz

Sara Kendrick

July 27, 2016 at 4:45 PM

Cute one!! Even though not really funny..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Liz Ward

July 29, 2016 at 3:05 PM

Thanks for your thoughts and comment Sara. Best wishes. Liz

Andrea Dietrich

July 23, 2016 at 10:31 AM

OH great humor. Sharks are smart!!!

Liz Ward

July 23, 2016 at 7:10 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting Andrea. I do appreciate it. Best wishes. Liz

Karam Misra

July 23, 2016 at 8:29 AM

Nice one, Liz. There are always those who enviously wait for some mischance to befall the ones who succeed. The achievers always swim in deep shark-infested waters! ~karam~

Liz Ward

July 23, 2016 at 8:58 AM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting Karam. Best wishes, Liz

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