Envy

in summer sun’s blaze
water turns soup lilies drink…
parched daisies envy

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December 27, 2022
Contest : A Haiku Premiere
Sponsored by : Brian Strand
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Kaur Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Daisies envying lilies for the summer sun is a witty image of envy. Lovely write!
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