Environment
ENVIRONMENT
entrenched
ancient
a songlike
environment
concealed
then
discovered
literally
to illustrate
the
delights
now focused
once forgotten
once silent
now
underlined
an exchange
slicing
spilling
liquid light
to reflect
this vein
of landscape
so
ravishingly
clad
to
climb
the
hillside
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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