Jean Murray Poet Acrostic

Entwined

E ver since I thought of you
N ever a moment's regret.
T ender was the lovemaking
W hich planted you and set
I n motion your beautiful soul.
N ow I have you nineteen years.
E ntwined our lives have been. 
D earest darling daughter of Jean.

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Poet Destroyer A February 27, 2016 at 1:14 AM thank you for the nice reply

Susan Gentry February 24, 2016 at 7:16 AM Ahhh! So neat how that happens! Congratulations on your win! Lovely. Jean Murray February 24, 2016 at 8:26 AM Thank you Susan. She is the light that came to me in my darkest hour.

Beautiful Scars February 23, 2016 at 11:58 AM Jean, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles* Jean Murray February 23, 2016 at 1:10 PM Thank you Laura.

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 11:46 AM Jean, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~ Jean Murray February 23, 2016 at 1:09 PM Thank you Linda.

James Inman February 23, 2016 at 10:52 AM Lovely Jean. Jean Murray February 23, 2016 at 12:33 PM Hello James. And thank you.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 22, 2016 at 10:21 PM Congrats on great win with this superb verse Jean.. Jean Murray February 23, 2016 at 4:38 AM Thank you Dr. This one poured from the heart, not the head.

Paul Callus February 14, 2016 at 9:01 AM How lovely and sweet, Jean! A great relationship between mother and daughter does bring forth an image of entwinement. [a moment's ... perfectly correct!] ~ Regards // paul Jean Murray February 14, 2016 at 10:07 AM Thank you Paul. Although I have three beautiful daughters, the baby remains the baby forever, n'est ce pas?

Arthur Vaso February 11, 2016 at 10:54 PM So beautiful, I think your daughter will be so proud of this poem! Jean Murray February 12, 2016 at 3:32 AM Her response included words like "wow" and that I was "not just a hat rack". It took me until I woke this morning to figure that one out Arthur. Thank you.

Jan Allison February 11, 2016 at 2:39 PM love the acrostic for you have used jean :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jean Murray February 11, 2016 at 2:58 PM Than you Jan. But is it moment's regret or moments regret?