Entwined

Warm waves caress soul Salty spay kiss sandy cheek Merging elements

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:56:00 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2010 4:32:00 AM

unique insight. Well done Christi. Congrats toyou.--Robert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations Christy, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku endeared by reality. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Christi. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:10:00 PM

Dear Christi, My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 3:17:00 PM

Congrats Christi on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:21:00 PM

Christi, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Susan Palli

Date: 2/14/2010 6:51:00 AM

I enjoyed that

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/13/2010 9:57:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku. I hope you entered it in Raul's contest.