Entombed

the bewitching hour--
silence hangs heavy like fog
claw prints on window

mist seeping through cracks
swallow soft comforting warmth
bedroom sealed--entombed
~*~

For Tracie's "Spooky Ku" Contest
10/21/12

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Poet Destroyer A

November 1, 2012 at 4:12 PM

Annalise, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2012 at 1:53 PM

I really like this one and I'm glad to get to see it for the winners being posted. CONGRATS to you. Long time no see!!

Bukang Liwayway

October 30, 2012 at 9:58 AM

Big Congratulations to you Annalise for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs! Maria

Len Gasun

October 30, 2012 at 7:58 AM

Congratulations on your win, Annelise! hugs:)Leonora

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2012 at 6:28 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 30, 2012 at 2:26 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku win Annalise xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:22 AM

Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 30, 2012 at 12:16 AM

CONGRATS ANNALISE ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WIN FOR SPOOKY KU LUV .. AWESOME PIECE .. WE R ALL DOING WONDERFUL .. SO BLESSED .. IN THE MIDST OF 'SANDY' BUT THANKING GOD ALL R SAFE .. TWO MORE DAYS BEFORE SHE LEAVES OUR SHORES .. BEACHES R DEVASTATED BUT NO LOSS OF LIVES SO FAR LUV .. HOPE U R OUT OF HS=ARMS WAY ..

Rachel St.Cross

October 28, 2012 at 12:00 PM

‡ Spooky. Thank You For Stopping By. Enjoyed The Bewitching Hour And Have A Nice Day, Beautiful Annalise. Love, Rachel *

Joy Wellington

October 27, 2012 at 9:42 AM

Hey sis...good to see you again. I know you send me emails sometimes but I am bad with that, I don't check my emails often and when I do I find I had one from you long time ago. Hope all is well with you and fam. Greatness penned here as usual, best wishes for a deserved win. One love my sis. Joy Wells SM!