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Entitled To Nothing

Are you glad? Though entitled to nothing, We are blessed!

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John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 5/1/2012 9:09:00 AM

Short, sweet, simple yet all encompassing, nicely done!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/3/2012 9:08:00 PM

Dear Laura, I have to agree with "Nick" on This, A Haiku is about Nature, a Senryu is about ( People, Feelings, and Heart ) The Message; Superb. I see YOU have Several Haiku's coming up Is This the Challenge between You , I think Slyvia?? See YOU soon, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/16/2012 5:47:00 AM

An interesting thought for the day, nice write. Watch the form haiku should have a seasonal reference, check out senryu as an alternative.

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/12/2012 11:49:00 PM

We are.. :o)