Enticing Bite

Its not at the heart of me, 
Not even close
Its not your heart I feel but your pulse

I feel it each time we meet
I see it in your eyes
A look so sweet

With open arms I embrace you
With hidden charms I seduce you
With open lust I infect you

I know you feel it too
But you chose ignorance 
for that hidden bliss

You bask in your pain, 
In that suffering you so beg for
the blood I tithe is more for you

For every bite I take
The lights blur and ecstasy is pure
I feel the wake in your breath

And with every night in which i visit
your light fades a little more
And mine grows more euphoric
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Davis Avatar
February 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM
It's seductive yet charming. Nicely done-Monqiue
Walker Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 10:04 AM
Thanks for your input =D Yeah, I'm pretty new at this but this seems to be a running style in all my poems. They all seem to have the sort of Lyrics/verse effect going one. None of them rhyme though XD
Harvey Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 10:01 AM
This poetry almost sounds as lyrics.. rock music. It's not to jump into, but I like the effect. There is something about raw lyrics or written word!! Thanks. Jan
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