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Enticing Bite

Its not at the heart of me, Not even close Its not your heart I feel but your pulse I feel it each time we meet I see it in your eyes A look so sweet With open arms I embrace you With hidden charms I seduce you With open lust I infect you I know you feel it too But you chose ignorance for that hidden bliss You bask in your pain, In that suffering you so beg for the blood I tithe is more for you For every bite I take The lights blur and ecstasy is pure I feel the wake in your breath And with every night in which i visit your light fades a little more And mine grows more euphoric

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
It's seductive yet charming. Nicely done-Monqiue
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for your input =D Yeah, I'm pretty new at this but this seems to be a running style in all my poems. They all seem to have the sort of Lyrics/verse effect going one. None of them rhyme though XD
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:01:00 AM
This poetry almost sounds as lyrics.. rock music. It's not to jump into, but I like the effect. There is something about raw lyrics or written word!! Thanks. Jan
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