Enticing

There was something magical and whimsical about the way she danced through life



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted for contest WONDERFUL ONE LINER sponsored by S. GRACE - December 22, 2017  -  RANKED 8TH

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Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2018 at 8:08 PM

a lovely one liner. Usually I see all the winners of these types of contests because they are so easy to view and congratulate. A belated congrats to you, Line.

Line Gauthier

April 15, 2018 at 8:59 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 18, 2018 at 6:10 PM

Hello Lin, I like your free verse. Have a nice evening my friend.

Line Gauthier

January 18, 2018 at 7:02 PM

Thanks for your visit, Darlene.

James Inman

January 18, 2018 at 6:41 AM

A lovely write Line. (FYI, the last update PS did caused the Camera icon to the right of the poem to take up space on the top three lines. If you drop your poem by three blank lines it aligns better. This new page arrangement has distorted many of my poems, especially the shape and concrete ones and ones that are centered).

Line Gauthier

January 18, 2018 at 7:03 PM

Thanks for the tip, James. Much appreciated.