Enticing

There was something magical and whimsical about the way she danced through life


Submitted for contest WONDERFUL ONE LINER sponsored by S. GRACE - December 22, 2017  -  RANKED 8TH

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2018 8:08:00 PM

a lovely one liner. Usually I see all the winners of these types of contests because they are so easy to view and congratulate. A belated congrats to you, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/18/2018 6:10:00 PM

Hello Lin, I like your free verse. Have a nice evening my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2018 7:02:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Darlene.

James Inman

Date: 1/18/2018 6:41:00 AM

A lovely write Line. (FYI, the last update PS did caused the Camera icon to the right of the poem to take up space on the top three lines. If you drop your poem by three blank lines it aligns better. This new page arrangement has distorted many of my poems, especially the shape and concrete ones and ones that are centered).

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2018 7:03:00 PM

Thanks for the tip, James. Much appreciated.