Enthralled

Spice
Spanish Harlem
 Tequila under sunset
Sweet/salty spice
Margarita
Sin
Tango
Salsa
I dipped my umbrella
Sweaty ambiance
Face flushed
Feel you
Peircing eyes
Desire
I dipped my umbrella

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Anne-Lise Andresen

March 29, 2016 at 7:40 AM

- Hey Lisa :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 28, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Lisa,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

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