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My heart is a black'nd hole, Break my heart and ill take you soul, Your demise is my goal, Play your games and pay the toll Enter heaven fall to hell, evil laughing while you yell, wondering how far you fell, landing in your fiery cell look at what youve done to me, forever blind and never free, Torture, laughter, misery Im in pain cant you see always hungry and never fed, Demons laughing in my head, Maggots crawling in my bed, some things better left unsaid Demons crawling on the walls, sticky fingers never fall, can you hear me when i call, can you even hear at all?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2016 10:18:00 AM
JOSHUA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:32:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Joshua. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:26:00 AM
a great poem, we all face demons at one time or another, I feel for those with manic deppression those voices neevr go away, but God does hear when we call and he listens, I feel he will free us all from our demons if we let him, he did it for me so I know it is true it is possible to be free God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:25:00 AM
I love the title and that drew me in...Your poem is awesome....the opening stanza really is done well and set the mood for the rest of this piece..good work and keep on doing work.
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