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With distant sight, eyes wandering the night. So much noise, continue, fight, a shell explodes, fade, gone, light.

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Date: 4/14/2019 6:42:00 PM

Wow! Such a potent pen, Kenneth. Powerful imagery that’s so evocative and emotive. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 4/14/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan with comment. Til recently my poems only appealed to me..thankyou again.

Date: 4/13/2019 11:57:00 AM

Powerful imagery, Kenneth. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 4/14/2019 7:06:00 PM

Any comment I receive, I value.thankyou so much Line.

Date: 4/13/2019 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kenneth ~ brave souls :)

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 4/14/2019 7:08:00 PM

As you as well P.M...but my fellow poet, I feel my place isn't a formal win... Ill always push for first tho..thanks so much.