Entanglements

Let me not so much be lost in involvements
as would make me incapable of
recognizing the fragrance of the flower 
beaming in my own yard; as would 
divest me of time 
for the merry sports of children
glee with the total joy of creation
radiant in their midst.

As would render me oblivious of my time
for the wind carrying the scents of love, 
for the birds chanting the notes of life, 
for sparkling waterfalls falling yet gay
and, too, for the stars fireflies carry
through the immensity of darkness.

Let me not so much be swept by haste.
Let me not lose the sight of myself
in the rush of life’s vicious circles.
Let me not go spiraling towards a peak
where vision would be blinded with
tears, washing down life’s rubles.

Not so much be lost as would have
no time to look at myself 
ever. Not so much, so much be lost, just
to see the hue, grace, glory gone
off the face of my beloved
as I’d wake and be conscious.

How long would I run after the 
time, 
my mind just a cosmos of void? 
Will you please go journeying
for your own sake, 
till I come living a moment of life? 



(Translated from Nepali by Manu Manjil)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 18, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Suman, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 6, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Hi Suman, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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February 6, 2014 at 11:25 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Suman- Choose your first good and well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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