Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Enslaved

You're the honey-sweet nectar,  
       and I'm the bumblebee. 
         You hold me captive;
caged in your mesmerizing eyes,
enslaved by your wicked charms.
         Don't ever free me!



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Charm Me ~Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Date written: 05/20/2021

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Sam Kauffman May 27, 2021 at 10:35 AM So romantic Edward! Love your imagery! Congratulations on your win! Edward Ibeh May 27, 2021 at 2:38 PM Thank you very much for the feedback and visit Sam:-) Most obliged.

Unseeking Seeker May 23, 2021 at 9:37 PM Oozing charm, apt for the ‘charm me’ contest! Congrats, Edward Edward Ibeh May 24, 2021 at 2:25 AM Thank you so much, Seeker:-)

Eve Roper May 23, 2021 at 7:15 PM Congratulations, Edward, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery, feel, and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh May 24, 2021 at 2:24 AM Thank you very much, Eve:-)

Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 7:38 AM Much revelry in cages of love--well said my friend: Don't ever free me! Edward Ibeh May 20, 2021 at 11:11 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)