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You're the honey-sweet nectar, and I'm the bumblebee. You hold me captive; caged in your mesmerizing eyes, enslaved by your wicked charms. Don't ever free me! Submitted for... Charm Me ~Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Date written: 05/20/2021

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Date: 5/27/2021 10:35:00 AM
So romantic Edward! Love your imagery! Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/27/2021 2:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit Sam:-) Most obliged.
Date: 5/23/2021 9:37:00 PM
Oozing charm, apt for the ‘charm me’ contest! Congrats, Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/24/2021 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Date: 5/23/2021 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Edward, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery, feel, and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/24/2021 2:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Date: 5/20/2021 7:38:00 AM
Much revelry in cages of love--well said my friend: Don't ever free me!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/20/2021 11:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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