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Enslaved

Drained of every drop of pride she cups her hands in vain As eyes seek to escape her haunting gaze. Gaunt and pale, her spirits crushed, young mind and body slain, Existence is one long and dreary haze. Sometimes in her dreamlike state she sees another life Where happiness and peace walked hand in hand, There a young girl freely plays, no thoughts of future strife, So many future hopes and dreams were planned. Destined, so it seemed, to suffer countless human woes, False hope came in angelic sweet disguise, So now enslaved, addicted, she is helpless to abstain; The girl who begs while inwardly she cries, And one more grieving Mother sadly sighs As demons recommence their evil lies. 28.08.19 'Eight word challenge contest' sponsored by Emile Pinet'

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Date: 10/1/2020 7:44:00 PM
Wendy, a big CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/1/2019 6:27:00 AM
Wow Wendy, this is a profound and powerful piece! It is so deserving of your bronze medal! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/15/2020 11:53:00 AM
The constant source of encouragement! Thank you so much, Connie.
Date: 8/31/2019 10:38:00 PM
Great way of using your words, Wendy, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/15/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thanks for the kind feedback, Eve.
Date: 8/31/2019 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations Wendy, your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/15/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for the challenge and placement, Emile.
Date: 8/28/2019 1:33:00 PM
Very dark lonely but such a well written piece. This was fantastic Wendy. This one touched me inside, gave me a chill. That is a good thing. Best wishes in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 2/15/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and give such a meaningful comment, Chris.

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