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Heavens open dreary gray, cool breeze, as silence swears. Emotion choked, refusing to give in to the tears. Without a doubt it sees the parched; what if it threatened. Halted, as the world spun round million miles a second; wrapped its' arms, squeezing fast, thunder roars, dislodging tears. 6/14/2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this awesome poem, all in five lines. Well done! :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:17 PM
So descriptive, Eve.. Congrats on your awesome win.
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Love your personification of Heaven, Eve. Congratulations on a top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations Eve! :) xomo
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 12:37 PM
- I visit your poem Eve, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:08 AM
An emotional write Eve, Congratulations. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Heavy emotions...a cloud of impending tears! Congrats, dear Eve!
Dutta Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:24 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love
May Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats..
Pett Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, so emotional and beautifully written. :))
One Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:12 AM
I felt the emotions in these 5 lines Eve.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
May Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:34 AM
A tear falling in a spin cycle of emotions..Nicely penned Eve
Trifiatis Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 3:50 AM
Thunderous verse dear, Eve!
Rose  Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 9:08 PM
God is oka with us dislodging a tear or two at times. Wonderfully written Eve.
B. Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:34 PM
I absolutely love your rhyme, Eve.. Perfectly penned and wonderfully done!! Blessings to you..
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Thank you Robertina.. Hugs Eve ~’*
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Very well written Eve! :)
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Thank you Heidi.. Hugs Eve ~’*
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