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Heavens open dreary gray, cool breeze, as silence swears. Emotion choked, refusing to give in to the tears. Without a doubt it sees the parched; what if it threatened. Halted, as the world spun round million miles a second; wrapped its' arms, squeezing fast, thunder roars, dislodging tears. 6/14/2018
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Date: 6/21/2018 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this awesome poem, all in five lines. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/19/2018 3:17:00 PM
So descriptive, Eve.. Congrats on your awesome win.
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Date: 6/18/2018 1:59:00 PM
Love your personification of Heaven, Eve. Congratulations on a top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2018 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations Eve! :) xomo
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Date: 6/17/2018 12:37:00 PM
- I visit your poem Eve, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 11:08:00 AM
An emotional write Eve, Congratulations. Tom.
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Date: 6/17/2018 10:32:00 AM
Heavy emotions...a cloud of impending tears! Congrats, dear Eve!
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Date: 6/17/2018 8:24:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love
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Date: 6/17/2018 7:59:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats..
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, so emotional and beautifully written. :))
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:12:00 AM
I felt the emotions in these 5 lines Eve.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 6/15/2018 4:34:00 AM
A tear falling in a spin cycle of emotions..Nicely penned Eve
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Date: 6/15/2018 3:50:00 AM
Thunderous verse dear, Eve!
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Date: 6/14/2018 9:08:00 PM
God is oka with us dislodging a tear or two at times. Wonderfully written Eve.
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:34:00 PM
I absolutely love your rhyme, Eve.. Perfectly penned and wonderfully done!! Blessings to you..
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Robertina.. Hugs Eve ~’*
Date: 6/14/2018 7:32:00 PM
Very well written Eve! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.. Hugs Eve ~’*

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