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Enlightening Waters

taking a shower she retreats to nature’s bliss... images of waterfalls *Written August 11, 2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/22/2014 12:07:00 PM

Yes, a genuine image coming up, we cannot separate her from the waterfalls Well done Carolyn hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2014 5:28:00 PM

this is really nice. I think it should have placed higher. Congrats on your win, sweetie.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2014 2:57:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2014 12:46:00 PM

- Congrats with your 11th place in the contest :) - Refreshing haiku, Carolyn !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2014 6:44:00 AM

Wonderful imagery n a fantastic haiku dear Carolyn! Congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2014 5:01:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2014 10:50:00 PM

wonderful imagery many congrats Carolyn:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2014 5:19:00 PM

love this imaginative write, dear Carolyn. Will do my best with the blog. Thanks for the win, by the way xx

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/14/2014 4:39:00 PM

still the poetess I see. hope all is well. still on my prayer list you are and always will be my friend. love john

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/14/2014 7:49:00 AM

Lovely and refreshing. Tfs

Ara Belle

Date: 8/13/2014 10:53:00 AM

Refreshing, my dear. I wish it was longer. LoveLots, Ara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/12/2014 8:16:00 AM

Ah, a beauty, Carolyn

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 8/12/2014 6:32:00 AM

Indeed you can feel the waterfalls... Bravo

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/11/2014 5:54:00 PM

interesting that the picture of a waterfall in the mind can bring on stirrings of relaxation

John Lawless

Date: 8/11/2014 4:21:00 PM

AH, that Zen moment when we let all else fall away. Love this one Carolyn.