Enlightening Waters

taking a shower
she retreats to nature’s bliss...
     images of waterfalls


*Written August 11, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrabarty Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Yes, a genuine image coming up, we cannot separate her from the waterfalls Well done Carolyn hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 5:28 PM
this is really nice. I think it should have placed higher. Congrats on your win, sweetie.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 2:57 PM
dropping back with my congrats Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 12:46 PM
- Congrats with your 11th place in the contest :) - Refreshing haiku, Carolyn !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Wonderful imagery n a fantastic haiku dear Carolyn! Congrats on huge win!
Mehta Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on the win, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 10:50 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats Carolyn:-) Hugs jan xx
Horne Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:19 PM
love this imaginative write, dear Carolyn. Will do my best with the blog. Thanks for the win, by the way xx
Loving Iii Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 4:39 PM
still the poetess I see. hope all is well. still on my prayer list you are and always will be my friend. love john
Sathasivam Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Lovely and refreshing. Tfs
Belle Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Refreshing, my dear. I wish it was longer. LoveLots, Ara
Mehta Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Ah, a beauty, Carolyn
Comporozos Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Indeed you can feel the waterfalls... Bravo
Parker Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 5:54 PM
interesting that the picture of a waterfall in the mind can bring on stirrings of relaxation
Lawless Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 4:21 PM
AH, that Zen moment when we let all else fall away. Love this one Carolyn.
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