Enlightening

First intent for a Tail Rhyme poem

Light has appeared between the cloud 
Warding off shadows of becloud
Appearing hope as a symbol
Giving a sense of willpower 
Faith as strong as a high power
Speaking for yourself very loud









Nayda Ivette
11-18-2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2015 8:23:00 PM

I kind of remember the rules of this form but not well enough to know if you got it right, but I bet you did because it looks just fine! It's nice to see you trying these new forms out. Keep it up, Nayda!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/18/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Is a French form consisting of two rhymes. First is a rhyming couplet of normally of eight syllables. The suggested pattern is aabccb