Enlightened



Enlightened you are -
With your wisdom and power,
Let me bathe in it.


(C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Hey thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I will try to see at least a few of yours. Having computer problems today and trying to get it fixed soon! I really like this senryu. The word bath, you are using like a verb, so write it like this: bathe
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August 12, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Thanks a lot for seeing my humble writes and for pointing out the required correction. I appreciate your friendly gesture and hope in future it will be continued. Warm regards, Bobby
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