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Enjoy the Ride

Some days are diamonds, some are stone To quote an old John Denver hit Truer words were never spoken The “stone days” (not stoned days!) Are only sent to us to test our resolve And to appreciate the “diamond days” even more To prove, that as dark or as difficult as life can get There is ALWAYS a silver lining Otherwise we'd all be candidates for the looney bin Trust me, have I ever lied to you before? Okay... well only a couple of times And I was under the influence??? The influence of WHAT, you may ask Uh, I take the fifth... okay here are some examples Now let me see, watching a pretty girl go by Or the government sending me an unexpected refund Of a couple of hundred dollars YEEHAW Maybe sitting down to my favourite meal With my lovely spouse I've adored Since the two of us were dreamy-eyed sweethearts In grade school right up to the present And now happily married with a couple of wee ones Don't get me wrong, I do have days of stone But my diamond days far outnumber them So the bottom line is Live, love, laugh and be happy You only get one chance to travel life's highway So ENJOY the ride!!! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 11/11/2014 10:49:00 AM
Jack I liked this a lot. You have a masterful way of drawing your readers in to the discourse..........then keep them. You deliver with a pithy causerie of sorts. My only negative is writing in 1st and 2nd person - who is you, and does 'you' differ to each 'you?' I do it too, so this is not an admonishment by any means. I come here cause you are good sir. Wish I were here more, still working on that. Congrats Jack. Thomas
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Date: 11/11/2014 11:10:00 AM
I think changing this line helped... "Since the two of US were dreamy-eyed sweethearts"
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Date: 11/11/2014 11:05:00 AM
Not at all taking it as an admonishment! I'm still learning... I'm 79 but it would be very pompous of me to think there's nothing more to learn! I'm always so aware of that 1st and 2nd person thingy but I probably missed this one! Thank you Thomas... really! Have a great day, my friend!
Date: 11/10/2014 9:26:00 AM
A great way of looking at life. Great advice for everyone Jack. I'm sure trying to enjoy it.
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:28:00 AM
Stay strong and think positive... YEEHAW! Trust me, I guarantee success! Loving huggs! XXX
Date: 11/10/2014 9:00:00 AM
Don't tell Dragon... but I liked it better when you said stoned days... But I never touch the stuff, and am against leagalizing it in our state... True. Jail times for that are ridiculous but I'd rather make it harder to get... and making it illegeal keeps it more controlled... Hog wild sounds scary... And stoned wild has become Colorado. Now when you say the Colorado Kid... I think the stoned kid... I think Dragon and I will enjoy life thru the high of having someone read our adventures...
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:16:00 AM
Never touch the stuff either but I'm not against legalizing it for medicinal purposes! Loving hugs XXX
Date: 11/10/2014 8:23:00 AM
Very beautifully you've said this about life, a Jack. So much wisdom packed encountered reading your delightful poem here. It makes one smile and ponder.Thank you my dear friend for sharing more about you and life as you see it thru this one journey called life. Best to you! :) love and light! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
You gotta be the sweetest thing!!!!!! You have no idea how you brighten up my days, my dearest Dorian! What a way to start what was a dreary Monday morning! Now the sun is shining brightly in my heart! Love, Jack XXXX

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