EnDuRe

Thinking about a reconciliation
With a girl l used to love and adore
But would be the same situation!
Just like how it used to be before,

Perhaps at times it was my limitasion?
 But she always liked to lay down the law
If their were any topic of conversation
Now just seems to be so obscure

But thinking that shes my desternation
Is the reason why l'd always go back for!
Though l am told if no real explanation
Then how could what we have ever endure?




Not original version original verson felt too personal written mid 2014 about ex partner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 21, 2026 at 10:40 PM
A candid, heartfelt reflection on love’s lingering pull and the difficult question of whether reconciliation can truly overcome old patterns. The recurring rhyme and direct voice give the piece an earnest, intimate ache.❤️
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August 22, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Oh thankyou for your kind words this is not my best effort or one l like that much original version better but more personal reacurring rhyme abab form lve done with many since 2020
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