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Endless Days

the clock ticked slower
in the time of the roses
and saffron sunshine

such chills many thrills
before time gained momentum
in forever fields

lime green foliage
and cerulean blue skies
the gone days recalled
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Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 10:04 PM
Loved your haikus. It is definitely an unchained melody. Superb thoughts. ~ ~
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 2:55 PM
I'm glad you liked this presentation. I began writing haikus years ago, after reading an interesting book on the form. Thank you for your thoughts. :=)
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Evelyn, Wonderful roses. I feel you lost in time and space, like this poem, never really longing to be found. Not as long as the Saxophone plays. -Richard
Buehler Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 8:46 PM
Right you are, Richard. I revisit the scene often, too. Thanks for your appreciation. :=)
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:17 PM
such beautiful memoires and gorgeous music too Evelyn:-) i especially like the final poem:-) hugs jan xx
Buehler Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:57 PM
Thank you for your words of inspiration, Jan. I'm so pleased. :=) hugs xx
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