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Endangered Language

Lo dere
who care?

Ma say
go way

No pride
wit ride

Someday
I may

Succeed
wit weed

Til den
AMEN

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2014 10:56:00 PM

Lovely approach to write slang in Footle. Congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/26/2014 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on a well-deserved placement in this contest! Enjoyed reading this fun piece! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 1:09:00 PM

fabulous win for contest Judy my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/26/2014 12:48:00 PM

Congratulations Judy for making the top 10... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/19/2014 9:00:00 AM

Wow the slangy footles ! Loved all Judy !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2014 1:14:00 PM

Like the slang..Way to go..If for a contest reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 12:23:00 PM

Clever! great bundle Judy :)

Judy Konos
Date: 8/18/2014 12:26:00 PM

I like footle because I am Lazy! Just remember two words, two syllables or one word with 2 syllables............. JR....has car!

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/18/2014 12:11:00 PM

I am ashamed to say that I am not familiar with footles. Having said that, I must say that yours are very cool! Thanks Judy. I really like the last one. "Til den, Amen". Sweet! ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2014 11:43:00 AM

Lovely string of footles Judy made me smile:-) Hugs jan xxx